Peer feedback first draft

The positive feedback we got from our peers was that the acting by Harrison was a good point which he done well. We got feedback on a good setting and idea that can be be used to create a good piece of work.

The bad feedback was that we need more footage with the interview and link with more titles. Also the interview needs to be in a better location with better sound so it is clear to hear. The lighting of the location changes half way through which needs to be adapted so it looks like it runs smoothly. Need to link the shots with better transitions so it looks more like a documentary.

To improve we can add our newspaper artcules into the start and ending to show that it is a documentary.